Life Without Love - Gemini J.

Life without Love

Living life without love...
Hurts in so manys ways...
Makes you hate waking up for a new day...
Living life without love is a pain...
Keeping the problems with you is a drain...
From day to day, nothing but the same ol' games...
Nothing new...no surprises...

Hate brews like morning stew...nothing but the leftovers cloud you...
Misty nights, and cloudy days nothing but trouble seems to come your way
You duck, and you dive...trying with all your strenght to hide
All the pain surrounds like a deep pool of water...

Drowing...but you still try and reach the top...
But there is nothing...and that nothing makes you ill...
Feeling like there is no otherway for you to go...
Somehow you know...putting a gun to you head...
Could take away the dread...

The reasons that has brought so many tears...
No love all these years...alone and mistaken for a fool...
Drowing in your own pool...
Misleading and controling you is the pain that you won't let go...
And all over you body from head to toe...

It runs free...manifesting uncontrolably...
Until the limit is reached and now everything is a speech...
About how you wouldn't let go and in the end...
It was you...that choose to pull the trigger...

Not knowing that the person which would make you happy...
Would never the less be you...

Did you write this?

Its amazing and has lots of descriptive saying that allow the reader to really feel the emotion in the poem...

Beautifully constructed!